THE BEST 43 OPENING LINES IN NOVEL WRITING HISTORY

They say you can’t judge a book by its cover.

best opening lines, Hemingway, Dickens, Austen, novelA good cover may make us pick the book up and think about buying it.

But it’s the first lines are crucial in helping us decide whether we are going to keep reading or not.

For my own part, I’ve read plenty of good books whose first lines I don’t remember.

I even tore out the first three pages of one of my favorite novels – The Poisonwood Bible – when I came to re-read it. (Thank God I persisted that first time. )

But all in all, you can never underestimate the power of a good opening line.

Here are 43 of the best in Literature:

1. "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in
 possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife."
 - Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice

There’s the hero, the problem and the goal in the first sentence. Brilliant.

2. "Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel 
Aureliano Buendía was to remember that distant afternoon when his 
father took him to discover ice."
- Gabriel Garcia Marquez, 100 Years of Solitude 

So many questions and all from just one sentence.

best opening lines, Hemingway, Dickens, Austen, novel3. “Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins.”

Vladimir Nabokov, Lolita 

The best opening to a crime novel since Donald Westlake.

4. "It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking 
thirteen. "
— George Orwell, 1984

They … what? What sort of world are we in?

5. "It was the best of times, it was the worst 
of times, it was the age of wisdom, it was 
the age of foolishness, it was the epoch of
belief, it was the epoch of incredulity, it 
was the season of Light, it was the season of 
Darkness, it was the spring of hope, it was 
the winter of despair."
- Charles Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities

Overblown, overdone, Hemingway’s eyes would have bled. But somehow it works. People who never read Dickens know that first line.

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6. “If you really want to hear about it, the first thing you’ll probably want to know is where I was born, and what my lousy childhood was like, and how my parents were occupied and all before they had me, and all that David Copperfield kind of crap, but I don’t feel like going into it, if you want to know the truth.”

— J. D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye

I believe this is what agents mean when they use the term: ‘voice’.

 

7. "It was a wrong number that started it, the telephone ringing 
three times in the dead of night, and the voice on the other end 
asking for someone he was not." 
— Paul Auster, City of Glass

That started – what? And who were they asking for?

8. "Mother died today." 
— Albert Camus, The Stranger.

Slap. Right between the eyes.

9. "Every summer Lin Kong returned to Goose Village to divorce 
his wife, Shuyu."
- Ha Jin, Waiting

He did WHAT? every year?

10. I am a sick man . . . I am a spiteful man.
 Fyodor Dostoyevsky, Notes from Underground

And I am a man that will keep reading to find out more.

11. "They shoot the white girl first."
—Toni Morrison, Paradise 

Brilliant, yet simple.

best opening lines, Hemingway, Dickens, Austen, novel12. “He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish.”

— Ernest Hemingway, The Old Man and the Sea 

Protagonist, main problem and goal all in the first line. This is why he got his reputation as an economical writer.

13. It was the day my grandmother exploded. 
— Iain M. Banks, The Crow Road 

Hard not to be hooked after that. The day your grandmother explodes is always an important day.

At least, it was in my family.

14. It was love at first sight. 
— Joseph Heller, Catch-22 

And nothing like the kind of love the reader is expecting. The novel just keeps getting better, funnier and stranger from there.

15. "What if this young woman, who writes such bad poems, in 
competition with her husband, whose poems are equally bad, should 
stretch her remarkably long and well-made legs out before you, so 
that her skirt slips up to the tops of her stockings?"
— Gilbert Sorrentino, Imaginative Qualities of Actual Things

Yes, yes, yes! What if?

16. "I have never begun a novel with more misgiving." 
— W. Somerset Maugham, The Razor's Edge

Really? Why?

17. "In my younger and more vulnerable years my father gave me some
 advice that I've been turning over in my mind ever since." 
- F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gatsby

And of course we want to know what that advice is.

18. "Francis Marion Tarwater's uncle had been dead for only half a 
day when the boy got too drunk to finish digging his grave and a 
Negro named Buford Munson, who had come to get a jug filled, had to 
finish it and drag the body from the breakfast table where it was 
still sitting and bury it in a decent and Christian way, with the 
sign of its Saviour at the head of the grave and enough dirt on top 
to keep the dogs from digging it up." 
— Flannery O'Connor, The Violent Bear it Away

Flannery was a genius. She never said more than she needed to say but it was always enough to keep the reader asking why.

best opening lines, Hemingway, Dickens, Austen, novel19. “Granted: I am an inmate of a mental hospital; my keeper is watching me, he never lets me out of his sight; there’s a peephole in the door, and my keeper’s eye is the shade of brown that can never see through a blue-eyed type like me.”

— Günter Grass, The Tin Drum

Voice, voice, voice.

20. "The past is a foreign country; they do things differently 
there."
  — L. P. Hartley, The Go-Between

Wonderful metaphor, and so many questions arise from this simple sentence. You just have to know what he means and why the past is important to him.

21. "Justice?—You get justice in the next world, in this world you 
have the law." 
— William Gaddis, A Frolic of His Own

Which tells you everything you need to know about where this novel is going

22. "Vaughan died yesterday in his last car-crash."
— J. G. Ballard, Crash

Not A car crash. His LAST one. Brilliant.

23. "I write this sitting in the kitchen sink."— Dodie Smith, I Capture the Castle

You can’t possibly not read on to find out why.

24. "I, Tiberius Claudius Drusus Nero Germanicus This-that-and-the-
other (for I shall not trouble you yet with all my titles) who was 
once, and not so long ago either, known to my friends and relatives 
and associates as "Claudius the Idiot," or "That Claudius," or 
"Claudius the Stammerer," or "Clau-Clau-Claudius" or at best as 
"Poor Uncle Claudius," am now about to write this strange history 
of my life; starting from my earliest childhood and continuing year
 by year until I reach the fateful point of change where, some eight
 years ago, at the age of fifty-one, I suddenly found myself caught
 in what I may call the "golden predicament" from which I have never
 since become disentangled."
- Robert Graves, I, Claudius 

Robert Graves establishing voice and telling us the story he’s going to tell us and all in one long, meandering but somehow compelling sentence.

25. "Of all the things that drive men to sea, the most common 
disaster, I've come to learn, is women." 
— Charles Johnson,  Middle Passage

No argument from me there.

26. Psychics can see the color of time it's blue. 
— Ronald Sukenick, Blown Away

Well you have to know more, don’t you?

 

best opening lines, Hemingway, Dickens, Austen, novel27. “In the town, there were two mutes and they were always together.”

 

— Carson McCullers, The Heart is a Lonely Hunter

How many towns has two mutes? Instantly, we’re there.

28. "He—for there could be no doubt of his sex, though the fashion
 of the time did something to disguise it—was in the act of slicing 
at the head of a Moor which swung from the rafters."
— Virginia Woolf, Orlando

This is an opening that is impossible to resist. She raises two questions that you immediately want answered – one has to do with sex, the other with death. This is why other writers were afraid of Virginia Woolf.

29. "High, high above the North Pole, on the first day of 1969, two 
professors of English Literature approached each other at a combined
 velocity of 1200 miles per hour." 
— David Lodge, Changing Places

And then, we ask breathlessly, what happened then?

30. "When the guy with asthma finally came in from the fire escape, 
Parker rabbit-punched him and took his gun away."
- Richard Stark, (Donald Westlake) The Mourner 

And this is just the first line!

31. "It was now lunch time and they were all sitting under the 
double green fly of the dining tent pretending that nothing had 
happened." 
- Ernest Hemingway, The Short Happy Life of Francis Macomber

The details of the ‘double green fly’ and the hanging question: what just happened?

32. "Someone must have slandered Josef K., because one morning, 
without his having done anything bad, he was arrested."
- Franz Kafka, The Trial

Listen to the narrator. ‘Without his having done anything bad.’ Really? And you believe him?

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33. “Where’s Papa going with that axe?” said Fern to her mother as they were setting the table for breakfast.”

– E B White, Charlotte’s Web

Not the way you’d think a children’s book would start.

But immediately you know this is going somewhere profound.

 

34. "All children, except one, grow up." 
– J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

‘Except one.’ What a great way to introduce an immortal main character.

35. "As Gregor Samsa awoke one morning from uneasy dreams he found 
himself transformed in his bed into a monstrous vermin." 
– Franz Kafka, Metamorphosis.

Kafka always started his stories at the very beginning, which is when Gregor changes into a cockroach. No exposition.  

36. "Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again." 
– Daphne du Maurier, Rebecca

For me, the best first line ever written.

37. "It’s a funny thing about mothers and fathers. Even when their
 own child is the most disgusting little blister you could ever 
imagine, they still think that he or she is wonderful."
- Roald Dahl, Matilda.

Another unexpected and brilliant first line to a children’s novel.

38. "I still remember the day my father took me to the Cemetery of 
Forgotten Books for the first time." 
– Carlos Ruiz Zafon, The Shadow of the Wind

You just have to know more about that place, don’t you?

39. "First the colours. 
Then the humans. 
That’s how I usually see things. 
Or at least, how I try. 
*** HERE IS A SMALL FACT *** 
You are going to die."
- Markus Zusak, The Book Thief

Markus establishes voice, the unique nature of his narrator and tells you where this story is going. Cheating, I suppose, as this is more than just one line. But it’s my blog, so there.

40. "Death is only the beginning; afterward comes the hard part."
– Jed Rubenfeld, The Death Instinct

Well it’s a world we all wonder about so Rubenfeld has our attention immediately.

41. "When a day that you happen to know is Wednesday starts off by 
sounding like Sunday, there is something seriously wrong somewhere."
- John Wyndam, The Day of the Triffids

And he leaves curious about what it is that’s wrong. We are primed.

42.  "There was me, that is Alex, and my three droogs, that is 
Pete, Georgie and Dim and we sat in the Korova milkbar trying to 
make up our rassoodocks what to do with the evening."
 - Anthony Burgess,  Clockwork Orange 

Burgess introduces not only his characters but the new language he uses in the novel. Compelling stuff.

43. "I am doomed to remember a boy with a wrecked voice - not 
because of his voice, or because he was the smallest person I ever 
knew, or even because he was the instrument of my mother's death, 
but because he is the reason I believe in God; I am a Christian 
because of Owen Meany."
- John Irving, A Prayer for Owen Meany 

Far too many questions not to read on …

 

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16 Comments

  1. This is a wonderful piece not just for readers but for writers (or visa versa). I’m printing it out and taping it above the place I write. Thank God we’ve had writers who have left these wonderful books and compelling lines for us. We all hear how wonderful books are, but few remember they are not really reading print on a page or screen, they are reading another mind, another person, another set of dreams, another soul. Reading is human company.

    • Spot on, Julia. The whole debate about print v digital is really only about reading preference – literature, as you say, is about reading another soul. And the really good writers somehow translate theirs into story.

  2. A wonderful compilation of first lines. A few I remember; most I do not. I’ve bookmarked this page for inspiration and a push in the right direction. Thank YOU.

  3. BTW, wicked and enticing first line of Corrigan’s Run. 🙂

  4. yes, Corrigan’s Run first line. Well! The first few words do tell us who he is, don’t they.

    • I guess they do Julia. But he comes good in the end. You can’t spend your whole life impregnating other people’s housekeepers! He has to try and better himself and I guess from there the only way was up.Took a world war to shift him though.

  5. Colin, my father, the 17-year old who went to fight in World War II with my grandmother’s permission and I used to play the “opening lines” game. Being voracious readers, everything was read, until my father hit upon “The Hobbit”. Although he enjoyed science fiction, he wasn’t too crazy about fantasy, and gave it up upon Bilbo’s pronouncement of “Alas, eleventy-one years is far too short a time to live among such excellent and admirable hobbits”. That is the only book that he never finished to my knowledge; I loved it. Thank you for the openers. It’s a great reminder of some old friend that need re-visiting and some new ones! xoxo

    • I remember reading Catch-22 in three days when I was 17 in between studying for finals and playing football seven times a week. Yossarian remains one of the sanest lunatics in Literature, and that line – when you understand what he actually means – was a great way of introducing us to his warped mind. There are some great opening lines here; not all led to books I enjoyed but I admire the craft with which each author introduced their story.

  6. I am doomed to read excellent first lines I did not write, yet.

  7. Some lines can stick to you like a Disney song, pick one. I heard a line in a movie, “I shot you once,” and kept repeating it till my family suggested a cure. Once was all that was needed they assured me. Now, I am doomed…
    Thanks, Colin.

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